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Sample reports

These two reports are illustrative examples written by WritSpeak to show the layout. They are not a real student's results. WritSpeak bands are AI-generated practice estimates, not official IELTS results. WritSpeak is not affiliated with IELTS, the British Council or IDP.

Writing Task 2

Illustrative example

Question: Some people think university education should be free for everyone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Band 6.5
Task Response6.5
Coherence and Cohesion6.5
Lexical Resource7.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy6.0

Strengths

  • A clear position is stated in the introduction and repeated in the conclusion.
  • Each paragraph has one main idea, and the linking is mostly natural.
  • Topic vocabulary such as "tuition fees" and "subsidised" is used accurately.

What to improve

  • The second body paragraph states an idea but gives no example, so it stays general.
  • Complex sentences often contain small grammar slips that distract the reader.

Your three most important fixes

Original: "Students who study for free is more motivated."

Better: "Students who study for free are more motivated."

The subject "students" is plural, so the verb needs "are".

Original: "Another reason is that, the government should invest in education."

Better: "Another reason is that the government should invest in education."

No comma is needed after "that" here.

Original: "This will make a lot of benefits for society."

Better: "This will bring many benefits to society."

"Make benefits" is not a natural combination; "bring benefits" is.

Vocabulary and grammar

You use some precise phrases already. Try replacing repeated "good" and "bad" with "beneficial" and "harmful" where they fit, and practise subject-verb agreement in longer sentences.

Next step

Add one specific example to your second paragraph, then check again to see which fixes you made.

Speaking Part 2

Illustrative example

Cue card: Describe a skill that took you a long time to learn.

Fluency and Coherence 6.5
Fluency and Coherence6.5
Lexical Resource6.5
Grammatical Range and Accuracy6.0

Pronunciation: not assessed. WritSpeak marks the transcript, so there is no overall Speaking band.

What we heard (transcript excerpt)

"I learned to play the guitar when I was fifteen year old. At first it was very difficult because my fingers was sore, but I practised every day and step by step I became better."

Fixes

"fifteen year old"

"fifteen years old"

Use the plural "years" with a number above one.

"my fingers was sore"

"my fingers were sore"

"Fingers" is plural, so use "were".

Advice

Your story is easy to follow. To reach a higher band, add a little more detail after each main point and use a wider range of linking phrases.

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